I think that I could have done a better job in my Antigone Essay. For my topic, I chose to compare the tyranny of Creon to Kim Jong-il. I believe that tyranny is a big theme in Antigone. Without Creon’s tyranny, no tragedy would have been made.
Content wise, I think I did a pretty good job, even though I still think it could have been better. I think that comparing how Creon and Kim Jong-il cause tyranny was not a bad choice. I think I needed more support to this thesis and a few more precise examples. Overall, content was not much of a problem.
What concerned me the most in my essay were the style and language mechanics. I totally forgot to fix all the tenses so that they were all consistent, integrate quotes, and other aspects of essay writing that were focused in class. If I were able to do this essay again, I would focus on fixing these kinds of problems.
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