For my Short Story Literary Essay, I chose to write about the significance of tradition in the lives of individuals, using the stories The Handsomest Drowned Man in the World and The Boat. Even though I got the same grade for the Antigone essay, I feel that this one was better.
In this essay, I put a lot of care in the style and language mechanics, unlike the Antigone essay. I checked to see that all the tenses were consistent and that the quotes were integrated. Also, the content was not bad. I think that I analyzed about the topic well.
The organization, though, was not that great. I did not plan out very much, and wrote it all in the spur of moment. If I planned ahead before hand and already made up my mind of how to write the essay, I think I would have gotten a higher score.
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